RAF the Animated Series

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A sprite series I've made for my friends on RAF It's a bit suckish though Razz

Subject: Re: RAF the Animated Series Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:13 am

My review about the series.

I like the story. It's well thought and constructive. The scenes weren't boring at all, even though it suffers with graphic qualities. You could improve on your animations and search for other sound effects.

But aside from that, it's a good series with a nice story.

So overall, 8/10.

Spoiler:

PS.: I watched all 5 Eps and the OP before posting this.

Subject: Re: RAF the Animated Series Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:41 pm

Nice storyline was good action could be better tho.
i suggest u find your own fighting style that can attract the viewer.

Subject: Re: RAF the Animated Series Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:47 pm

Devilman wrote:: Nice storyline was good action could be better tho.
i suggest u find your own fighting style that can attract the viewer.

I think his fighting style is unique enough. Well balanced, but still great action.
The only thing that it needs is to increase the image quality a bit. It's not like that we are running on DSL or any of these dial-ups. =P

Subject: Re: RAF the Animated Series Mon Jan 25, 2010 7:37 pm

Hmm... Why does the intro somewhat copy the intro of FMA (FullMetal Alchemist)?
That's ALL I'll see for now (just the intro). I don't want to get accused for copying someone else's idea. I'm afraid I can't see any more of it (although I wish to). DX

There should've been a poll here.

Posts : 4 Join date : 2010-01-23

Pkmn2 wrote:

My review about the series.

Spoiler:

Ya know, somebody else said that too and when I made this I had NO idea what TTA was. I know of the guy who made TTA (parody rangers FTW) but I didn't realize my idea had already been done

I'm also aware of the crappy image quality, if anybody has anyway for me to fix this I'd really appreciate it

thedespised2166 wrote:: Hmm... Why does the intro somewhat copy the intro of FMA (FullMetal Alchemist)?

Er...cuz the same song was used in FMA...Other than that, I don't see any similarities between my opening or FMA's

Subject: Re: RAF the Animated Series Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:25 pm

Blue22 wrote:: Er...cuz the same song was used in FMA...Other than that, I don't see any similarities between my opening or FMA's

Well, I knew that, but the standing around at the beginning? It just seems familiar.

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In case anbody cares, episode 6 is now up

http://aquarious2008.deviantart.com/art/RAF-TAS-6-152237993